Kommentare zu Kristin's Heat and Dust http://kristinhd.wordpress.com Just another Heat and Dust Blog Sun, 08 Feb 2009 21:14:50 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Kommentare von Änni zu Characters http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/characters/#comment-52 Änni Sun, 08 Feb 2009 21:14:50 +0000 http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/characters/#comment-52 teilweise sehr hilfreich! fein gemacht! teilweise sehr hilfreich!
fein gemacht!

]]> Kommentare von donath@ulricianum zu Satipur or the mountains- which location is better? http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/2008/05/20/satupur-or-the-mountains-which-location-is-better/#comment-40 donath@ulricianum Sun, 29 Jun 2008 09:48:35 +0000 http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/?p=26#comment-40 Super text, super considerations! dt Super text, super considerations!
dt

]]> Kommentare von donath@ulricianum zu Reading blog – experiences, pros & cons http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/2008/06/26/reading-blog-experiences-pros-cons/#comment-39 donath@ulricianum Sun, 29 Jun 2008 09:45:28 +0000 http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/?p=37#comment-39 "But I must say that somehow that isn’t that bad"... ...is what I think as well, despite the time-consuming aspect :-) Your idea of every reader leaving helpful hints at language probs is a smashing one, here is my input: --> to type on the key-board [y] --> if-clause:if all the viewers [visitors] left a comment... Thanks for your devotion, your reading [b]log is definitely awesome!!! dt „But I must say that somehow that isn’t that bad“…
…is what I think as well, despite the time-consuming aspect :-)
Your idea of every reader leaving helpful hints at language probs is a smashing one, here is my input:
–> to type on the key-board [y]
–> if-clause:if all the viewers [visitors] left a comment…
Thanks for your devotion, your reading [b]log is definitely awesome!!!
dt

]]> Kommentare von Inebriation zu The Nawab’s last years http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/2008/05/15/the-nawabs-last-years/#comment-38 Inebriation Thu, 19 Jun 2008 05:05:50 +0000 http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/?p=24#comment-38 Somehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation :) Anyway ... nice blog to visit. cheers, Inebriation. Somehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation :) Anyway … nice blog to visit.

cheers, Inebriation.

]]> Kommentare von katjachristina zu Suttee and the reaction by it from the British society and Olivia http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/2008/05/20/suttee-and-the-reaction-on-it-from-beth-crawford-and-olivia/#comment-32 katjachristina Thu, 29 May 2008 17:16:21 +0000 http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/?p=27#comment-32 Dear Kristin, good that you explained what “Suttee” means! :) And the figures give a better understanding of the real situation! :) I also really like that you put a pictures in your article, too. :) Excellent post! Katja Dear Kristin,
good that you explained what “Suttee” means! :) And the figures give a better understanding of the real situation! :)
I also really like that you put a pictures in your article, too. :)
Excellent post!
Katja

]]> Kommentare von katjachristina zu Suttee and the reaction by it from the British society and Olivia http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/2008/05/20/suttee-and-the-reaction-on-it-from-beth-crawford-and-olivia/#comment-31 katjachristina Thu, 29 May 2008 17:15:41 +0000 http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/?p=27#comment-31 Dear Kristin, good that you explained what “Suttee” means!  And the figures give a better understanding of the real situation!  I also really like that you put a pictures in your article, too.  Excellent post! Katja Dear Kristin,
good that you explained what “Suttee” means!  And the figures give a better understanding of the real situation! 
I also really like that you put a pictures in your article, too. 
Excellent post!
Katja

]]> Kommentare von katjachristina zu The Nawab’s last years http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/2008/05/15/the-nawabs-last-years/#comment-21 katjachristina Fri, 16 May 2008 22:11:52 +0000 http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/?p=24#comment-21 Hi Kristin, it seems like you put a lot of effort in your blog! It’s just great!  I learn more and more about India and the story! You explained the Nawab’s change very well and you have a good structure so it’s easy to follow your thoughts!  I found a few mistakes, maybe it helps you. You have swap your word order and say “He is not living in the Palace anymore ...”. Grammatically, “Anymore” always belongs at the end of the sentence or in this case at the end of the first part. When you have it after “living” you say that he is dead. And you should also change it here: “Surely he is still […] in Kathm anymore, he is no longer interested in it.” You should delete the comma before after as it is a listing. “As he visits Harry he has become an old man of 50 years (,) and enormously fat, looking….” When you use “Therefore” (Therefore, he never brought Olivia) at the beginning of a sentence, you have to do a comma after it. You have to detach “therefore” as you use it as an introduction which bridges this sentence with the one before. It would be the same when you have other words like “however”, “consequently” or “therefore” at the beginning. So you should also put a comma here “Furthermore, he returned to spent more time…” Do not make a comma here “…London and she too said, that he is a more…” as the “that” completes the “said”. Cheers, Katja Hi Kristin,

it seems like you put a lot of effort in your blog! It’s just great!  I learn more and more about India and the story! You explained the Nawab’s change very well and you have a good structure so it’s easy to follow your thoughts! 

I found a few mistakes, maybe it helps you.

You have swap your word order and say “He is not living in the Palace anymore …”. Grammatically, “Anymore” always belongs at the end of the sentence or in this case at the end of the first part. When you have it after “living” you say that he is dead.
And you should also change it here: “Surely he is still […] in Kathm anymore, he is no longer interested in it.”

You should delete the comma before after as it is a listing. “As he visits Harry he has become an old man of 50 years (,) and enormously fat, looking….”

When you use “Therefore” (Therefore, he never brought Olivia) at the beginning of a sentence, you have to do a comma after it. You have to detach “therefore” as you use it as an introduction which bridges this sentence with the one before. It would be the same when you have other words like “however”, “consequently” or “therefore” at the beginning.
So you should also put a comma here “Furthermore, he returned to spent more time…”

Do not make a comma here “…London and she too said, that he is a more…” as the “that” completes the “said”.

Cheers, Katja

]]> Kommentare von an08na zu The various facets of Maji’s character http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/2008/05/12/the-various-facets-of-majis-character/#comment-16 an08na Thu, 15 May 2008 08:24:51 +0000 http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/?p=23#comment-16 Hey:) I like your description of Maji. Although it is quite short it offers much information to the reader and he gets to know the most important facts about this woman...;) Hey:)
I like your description of Maji. Although it is quite short it offers much information to the reader and he gets to know the most important facts about this woman…;)

]]> Kommentare von katjachristina zu The attitude to abortion and it’s relation to the Indian society http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/2008/04/28/the-attitude-to-abortion-and-its-relation-to-the-indian-society/#comment-13 katjachristina Thu, 01 May 2008 20:09:39 +0000 http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/?p=21#comment-13 Hey Kistin, Mr. Donath gave me your blog address to comment on it! I think your writing is very good! :) And the article is interesting. I had no information about the content but I understand what you wrote and got a good overview! You should delete the comma in your first sentence. [First of all has to be said (,) that … appearances that (and here you had a slip in your writing, use "than" instead of "that") e.g. in Europe.] If you want a comma, you can change the sentence and say: First of all, it had to be said that in… You also did a comma here [By that we can conclude, that most…] but there should not be one. It would be better to keep one time. Write the whole sentence in simple present as you are taking about the book and you already started the sentence in simple present (delete the “did” and use an “s”). [As it is said in the text, Maji recognizes very early that the narrator is pregnant, long before she (did) even notice(s) it.] …hundred years ago, when children (were) born out of … Cheers, Katja Hey Kistin,
Mr. Donath gave me your blog address to comment on it! I think your writing is very good! :) And the article is interesting. I had no information about the content but I understand what you wrote and got a good overview!

You should delete the comma in your first sentence. [First of all has to be said (,) that … appearances that (and here you had a slip in your writing, use "than" instead of "that") e.g. in Europe.] If you want a comma, you can change the sentence and say: First of all, it had to be said that in… You also did a comma here [By that we can conclude, that most…] but there should not be one.

It would be better to keep one time. Write the whole sentence in simple present as you are taking about the book and you already started the sentence in simple present (delete the “did” and use an “s”). [As it is said in the text, Maji recognizes very early that the narrator is pregnant, long before she (did) even notice(s) it.]

…hundred years ago, when children (were) born out of …

Cheers,
Katja

]]> Kommentare von mmfreinhard zu Useful vocabulary http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/useful-vocabulary/#comment-12 mmfreinhard Sun, 27 Apr 2008 08:45:26 +0000 http://kristinhd.wordpress.com/?page_id=20#comment-12 Very well selected words, just slight typing errors: -->to strive for sth --> to amend sth and btw: your blog is excellent and a wonderful example of a reading log that shows a lot of motivation and interest :-) dt Very well selected words, just slight typing errors:
–>to strive for sth
–> to amend sth
and btw: your blog is excellent and a wonderful example of a reading log that shows a lot of motivation and interest :-)
dt

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